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Thursday, 18 October 2012

Mum Poems

Her hair’s straight like flax leaves
from the garden.

Her eyes are two
chocolate maltesers.
Her nose is sharp.

Her hands are smooth
and loving as she holds my hands.
My mum is beautiful times one thousand.
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2 comments:

  1. Lavinia24 October 2012 at 14:25

    Sup Trin

    Your poem is really great but you need to think of your own sentence. Don't copy others. I like your simile.



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  2. Leila7 May 2013 at 12:18

    Hey Trin.....

    Your poem is awesome but next time you can make it more interesting. I liked how you described your mums eyes it was really creative and sweet. Keep posting posts and keep being creative.

    Leila

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